![]() ![]() From starting our relationship in October all the way to April, I thought our relationship would last forever. I always tried not to make a mistake, and I usually didn’t besides the one time where I accidently punched her in the face and gave her a black eye, but that is in the past. I was able to be myself around her and I always just felt so comfortable when I was with her. Katie and I had an outstanding relationship. So being the gentlemen that I was and am, I trusted her. She did have a crush on another guy in our grade before we ever started talking named Brian, but she said that her feelings were completely gone for him. Katie had never had a boyfriend beside myself. ![]() I think it was because of my sparkling smile and my quick humor. I don’t know how I managed to reel her in. I was dating the captain of the cheerleading team, and she was one of the most beautiful and popular girls at my high school her name was Katie. To be honest, for a little while I actually thought I had the whole dating thing figured out. Ladies and gentlemen, I was always the one that got kicked. Normally what happens is that the girl falls in love with the weird guy and the one she was dating before gets kicked to the curb, even though he did nothing wrong. Also, they know the weird guy who was either from the girls past or either made a mistake in a prior encounter with the girl. ![]() Although I thought I had figured out everything in high school, there was one thing that I had not figured out in those short four years, and that was relationships.Įveryone knows that guy in all the romantic comedies and chick flicks that is dating the popular girl or fell in love with the main character. As you can probably tell, I loved my high school I felt like a king in the jungle. It was close enough to the downtown city area that you could walk there, and it was far enough that the traffic was not extremely bad. My high school is in the green and luscious Franklin, Tennessee. I was the student body president, captain of the wrestling team, and I played a big part in the theatre and broadcasting programs. I had a particularly splendid time in my four years of high school, especially my senior year. Yes, the day was finally here it was the last day of high school. I think the whole peer review system worked well, I just think that we need more practice at it and we need better communication within our groups. I don’t think that I gave the best peer reviews for my group, because I did not have the time and I did not stick to our given questions, but I know that I will be better next time. I did not see most of the problems that my group noticed, so I was able to get better at my writing at the same time that they were. My group was, for the most part, very constructive in their feedback. I actually really enjoyed my peer review. I also need to work on a good balance of going from scene to story to make my essays more readable and more enjoyable. ![]() I especially need to work more on my sentence structure and going more in detail into my scenes and characters. I still need to improve all almost all of my writing skills. I also was about to get better at my sentence structure so that my sentences would not drag on, and it would be easy to read. I was able to work on expanding my vocabulary during my personal narrative to make it more interesting. So the main challenges where how I wanted to start and finish my personal narrative, I was able to overcome these by thinking hard about which way I interpreted my essay would be more entertaining and attention grabbing. Like I said previously, after I eventually got started it was easy for me to keep going. The main struggle I had was actually starting the essay, because I had no idea where to start. When we were first assigned this project I had many different ideas of what I wanted to write about, but it took my a long time before I figured out exactly what I wanted to write about. I wanted it to be very attention grabbing with a twist, but I also wanted it to be very emotional. The main strength of mine that the essay played to was my creativity and my flexibility for different writings, because I have never written an essay as serious and sad as this one, but I did have to add my happy ending when I finished the story. After I had got started on my personal narrative, it was easy for me to keep writing and keep following along the story line. As I was writing my personal narrative for my composition 1 class, it easily made my mind boggle. ![]()
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